The project opens with the intro track,
"An Honest Attempt At Growth", which finds
Puppit
detailing an incident from his childhood that would, although unknown at the time, serve as the palette from which he'd paint himself into unseen corners throughout his life. His storytelling ability shines here as he wipes an almost staccato flow over producer,
Omgsora's
ambient strummings. The hookless introduction (as most intros are) deals with anti-social behavior in its proper definition, which is such a breath of fresh air for the much misnomered word. In just under 3 minutes, a beginning, middle, end, and reflection are binded together beautifully as the set up for what's to come in the life and times of a puppet who refuses to move against the strings of a life predicted. This is probably the weakest moment of the project, as from this point on, we get a different animal of an emcee. The
DAGA
produced follow-up track,
"Fuck Your Feelings"
features a braggadocious
Puppit
proving his lyrical mettle over the aforementioned's slapping bass and piano instrumentation. The flow and bars here are "smooth like a muh'fuckin bald spot" with its rudebwoy delivered rhymes, and hommage to the dangerous Turpin and Ballard neighborhood of his hometown, where robberies, dice games, and lime-assisted bottles of "Bump" go hand-in-hand with good times. Although only 1 verse long, its wedge between a gritty and barking hook of "Tell that bitch\said 'fuck your feelings'\how I feel about it\ HEY!!", makes it a thing of replay-value wet dreams. After childhood musings and neighborhood naughties, it's Write or Die's third cut,
"Old Ghost (City's
Only Sleeping)"
that finds
Puppit
baring a deeper piece of his soul over the acoustic styling of Ryini Beats, who appears twice more during the project. On this ode to his own suicidal ideations, and all that fuels them,
Puppit
displays a penchant for self-reflection that could easily be placed against
Joe Budden's
hailed
Mood Muzik
series. Citing death as an only friend during the times of his metaphorical (and real life) mire, the hook holds together verses that bleed the helplessness and hoplessness of a man too tired of fighting against his life's vicissitudes to fight forward where he no longer sees the point in fighting at all. Here, it is not
Puppit
who houses depression, but rather the latter that houses him. After listening to the EP's wayward protagonist invite a knocking Grim Reaper into this home, the door swings open in the form of a segue into
Write or Die's
fourth, and most lyrically dense moment;
"R.E.D (Reticent Emotional Distress)".
Where
"Old Ghost..."
found
Puppit
embracing the opportunity to drink from death's goblet, it's here on the
Yusei
produced
"R.E.D..."
that he displays the reluctance to swallow its toxins. While the hookless, "R.E.D..." comes off less like a stand-alone track than an epilogue to its preceding song; the pensive poetry offered here is gorgeously constructed. With his rapid yet rhythmic delivering of what feels like one's life flashing before the eyes, in verse; we get to see a different facet of
Puppit's
ability as not only a lyricist, but also a technician of rhyme structure. An anti-suicide note better experienced than written about,
"R.E.D..."
embodies why a project like
Write or Die
is even in existence. Next on the tracklist is
"The Luxury of Subtlety", where
Puppit
and
Ryini Beats
synergize to deliver what easily feels like the hit single of the EP. With its raw, live-feeling acoustics
"...Luxury..."
is MTV\VH1's Unplugged, executed as perfectly as could be on a recorded project. Singing (and impressively so) of a love now gone, and the feelings involved with its demise and acceptance of said relationship status,
Puppit
proves here that his pen knows no bounds.
"...Luxury..."
contains so much emotion in both the lyrics and vocal tones utilized that it's easy to get lost in the two-verse lamentation, with its über catchy hook, guitar slaps, and well composed pop-structure. After finally taking
"...Luxury..."
off repeat,
Write or Die
scribbles into its sixth offering, the
Retnik
Beats
produced,
"Murder In the Owlery". On
"Murder..."
we get another helping of the
Puppit
that appeared near the open of the project on "Fuck Your Feelings". Heavy bass beat, hard hook, and enough bars and punches to warrant an I.D. check at the listening.
"Murder..."
is also a welcome break from an EP which until its time is pretty weighty on subject matter. Closing the project out is the last of
Puppit
and
Ryini Beats's
collaborative efforts,
"The Motions". On
"The Motions"
we get another relationship record, but done differently than previously heard on
"The Luxury of Subtlety"...This
Puppit
is three verses of great rhyming about a toxic relationship in all its inglorious luster. From appreciation at its finding, understanding of what\why it is, and the acceptance of its ending,
"The Motions"
is a penultimate of sorts where the "love" song is concerned. It's staunch honesty with lines like "amazed I stood beside you\then hit my knees to praise a golden idol\a girl who hates herself as much as I do\to find you in the reeds\ I searched not high, but low\and sank to depths that previously I declined to go..." makes it a sad occasion that the EP ends here, and really causes wonder of how an emcee of such an open caliber has gone unnoticed by the masses, thus far.
"But I could never right my wrongs unless I write'em down as well..." belted a 2012 Kendrick Lamar
on his debut album's single, "Poetic Justice". After listening to Write or Die
hundreds of times now, I feel this line is the most fitting to open the review on an EP with such reach, not only out of Puppit's
hometown, but into himself as well. Roughly 22 minutes of an all killer no filler project recorded into the microphone of his cell phone's ear buds, Write or Die
kind of carves its own niche in a current climate full of trap rap and escapist lyrics. 1 intro, 2 bangers, 2 love songs, and 2 songs about pain and perseverance...all with great lyricism, structure, production, and hooks that stick like Thelma's oatmeal, make for one helluva debut. Puppit's
ability to pour himself into each track is the highlight of every moment from Write or Die, and apart from wanting to hear a feature-length project, I can't think of a bad thing to say about it. Too much said here could only diminish what Write or Die
ultimately is, and that is: a lyrical embodiment of the phrase, "pain shared is pain lessened".
Pros:
sonically meshes (production choices), in-depth lyricism, varying cadences, subject matter, to the point (not a bar wasted), great hooks, short (no room for error), platform choice (Bandlab could really get a name off of this)
Cons:
This wasn't a full-length feature
By Ilu Ha-Binah El